My name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
Ka pai on a great comic strip! I like the captions you’ve used for the expressions, particularly the achoo for the man who definitely looks like he could be sneezing! You’ve done a fabulous job, it’s very well written and easy to follow. What made you think of this story?
If you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships, not fishy teeth, though it is pretty funny.
Perhaps you could increase the size of your post so your readers can better appreciate your comic. It would make it a bit easier to read.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Patrick,
My name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
Ka pai on a great comic strip! I like the captions you’ve used for the expressions, particularly the achoo for the man who definitely looks like he could be sneezing! You’ve done a fabulous job, it’s very well written and easy to follow. What made you think of this story?
If you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships, not fishy teeth, though it is pretty funny.
Perhaps you could increase the size of your post so your readers can better appreciate your comic. It would make it a bit easier to read.
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)